Crow: An exciting older alpha man and younger curvy girl mc romance, you can't afford to miss. (Savage Saints MC Book 4)

Short, sweet and easy read. Crow never experienced anything good example of how to treat a woman respectfully but when the opportunity came for him to learn and change his ways he took it. It is said that children live what they learn but when you become an adult it is on you change negative behaviours the best you can. How will Brooklyn impact his decision to change?ARC reader. This is a voluntary review

Crow is Ryder, from the Saints MC, cousin. He appears at the Saints club house, very drunk. He's been stripped of his colours by the Sinners. He's not a very nice man having been brought up badly, his attitude to women is atrocious and his language isn't much better. Brooklyn takes it upon herself to try and change him.I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.

Cringingly immature. These guys are not the strong silent type. They are very whinging, rambling juveniles. The dialogue is so childish. The writing is bad, very amateur. Problems from page one, with the first sentence written in present tense, 'I walk into the.. ' but the next sentence written in past tense, 'I stumbled...'.The so called author uses the word 'had' more than any other. Every sentence was - he had... I had... we had... it had.. that had.. they had... and on and on. Clearly this person, I refuse to call them an author because they haven't even tried to write professionally, thinks writing in the past tense requires the use of hundreds of superfluous 'had' to denote it.Really badly written, with immature characters, immature dialogue, and immature and unprofessional writing ability. Zero stars. It's really not good. Amazon needs to start taking responsibilty to ensure someone publisheing a book actually has some ability to write. Or at least bothers to Google search the basic rules of writing, before allowing them to publish.There are numerous apps that correct this stuff for you for free! So, there's no excuse for any one publishing a book to write this badly. I, for one, am getting seriously irritated by people calling themselves 'authors' but who publish such badly written rubbish like this.

Brilliant book happy ending which is nice the way Brooke stands by her man is cute and he chooses to change nice one