Forever Mine (Providence Series Book 1)

I tried so hard to finish this book because it was highly recommended to me by a friend. I couldn’t do it, though. 57% is where I finally gave up.I don’t even know if I can list all the things I didn’t like about this book. First, there are way too many characters and relationships going on. It made the book convoluted and hard to follow. Second, cliché, cliché, cliché. All the men were overbearing and jealous. All the “good” characters were gorgeous—men and women. You had the cliché “hookers” who cause problems, the H who had an extremely filling sex life in his past, and the close to virginal h whose last boyfriend of nine months she hadn’t slept with. Oh yeah, and was also out to get her. Plus, Richard (a bad guy who I have no idea how he fits in), some mystery man who is out to destroy Maya’s family, and another mystery man who is out to destroy Ren’s family. 🙄Too much. I found myself rolling my eyes on almost every page. Even the humor went from funny to stupid. The editing needing work too. There wasn’t a lot of mistakes, but run on, convoluted sentences and way too much unnecessary detail. Sorry if this comes across as harsh, but I hope the author takes this as constructive criticism because I do see potential and obviously a lot of people liked this book.

A number of things bothered me. For example, they all knew that Francheska was involved, so why didn’t anybody, including the ‘experts’, question her? This was just one of many conveniently overlooked things that should have happened. Those cheap plot ploys ruined my enjoyment of the story.And what’s with all of the women constantly getting hurt? It usually happened thru cliched misunderstandings or manipulations that made things seem other than what they were. (See above name that should have been dealt with early on.) Again, cheap ploys.In some of the reviews there were complaints of too many different couple’s stories at the same time. While that was slightly annoying to me, it didn’t bother me as much as it did others.Normally I would have rated this story lower because of all of the above. I have a hard time doing that this time, though, because it made me laugh in spots, and I tend to forgive somewhat if I like the humor. I think if Cole hadn’t been in this story I would have given up on it and rated it lower.For the most part I actually liked how the author wrote the story. She just needs to get some help figuring out how to get from A to B without resorting to immaturity.I received the first two stories for free, so I’ll definitely try the second one. Whether I continue afterwards will depend on how that one goes.

I'd read this story & it's entire series previously and forgot to rate/review but now that I'm doing a re-read, can't pass on the opportunity to encourage others to get in on this. That said, since I would only be repeating the same high praise for Every. Single. Book., I will just leave a 5 start rating on the remainder of the books in this series.-Truly exceptional writing (fluidity,consistency,development)-Characters that are flawed, relatable, passionate, loyal, lovable & hilarious that you'd want to know and be friends/family with irl.-Plot that is addictive, mysterious/thrilling&focused in both the individual couple stories as well as series story arc.-Super hot steamy scenes(YUM)-Perfectly timed humor (or should I say, humour* since our lovely author is British!) Honestly, I have never laughed so hard while reading and it caused my family to give me weird/'concerned-for-my -mental-health' looks; especially when I laughed so much I had tears. I also may or may not have snorted.(repeatedly)-^That's then blended perfectly in with the smexy times, mystery, danger, falling in love, family love &chaos all equaling thrills that's keep you on the edge of your seat till the very end.There is literally nothing I would change about this book or series (and I'm picky.)So do yourself a favor (or favour) and read this series! I also highly recommend *all other books by Mary B Moore because at this point I've read all except 2 and I've *never been disappointed!

This book deserves more than five stars. Yes, it is definitely that good with a bag of chips, a bowl of ice-cream and an ice cold glass of Pepsi. From the first chapter to the end of the book is filled with so much laughter, drama, action, suspense and quite a few scintillating and panting dripping wet sexcapades. Don't even let me start on the characters in this book, because I am not sure what the author was sipping or drinking, when this book was being written. But let me tell you, these guys are beyond yummy with cherry on top. Oohlala moments to die for, with quite the force of dominance, possessiveness and protectiveness shining through, to the detriment of some really awe inspiring, capable, strong and self relient females, who rocks their world and so much more.This first book in the series is about Ren and Maya. They saw each other for the first time at the supermarket and was smitten with each other ever since. Only for Ren to find out that his brother Cole, is crushing on his woman. But Ren ain't having none of that, Maya is his and will remain his forever (is Maya aware of this?). But there is problem in paradise from both Ren and Maya's enemies and the ones they are not aware of.After a few accidents with Maya, Ren is becoming waring and start to seriously look into everything that has been happening since she arrived, but nothing is becoming obvious as to the reasons for the attacks. Can he keep her and their families safe from these violent attacks?READERS, DEFINITELY WORTH EVERY PENNY!!!!P. S. Cole was beyond hilarious in this book and I can't wait to get my hands on a few of these characters book. I hope and pray the author have their books out or it's in the making.

Wow what can I say, this book has been in my tbr list for a while, I’m not sure why i hadn’t read it but after seeing lots of recommendations I decided to bump it up my list. I’ve just stayed up way past my bedtime to finish it. The storyline was great the writing was great. The character and humour in this book made it amazing. Honestly it was just a brilliant read from start to finish. I’m now off to sleep ready for book 2 tomorrow.

Goodness this book has made me laugh so many times it’s untrue. Yeah the book primarily about Maya and Ren but for me the absolute shining star was Cole, he was so flipping funny. Will be reading more of this series because not only do I need answers but I also need more Cole.

I am not sure why everyone has given this such high reviews. I think it must be one of the most annoying books I have ever tried to read and I read a LOT - eventually I just had to give up through frustration. The main characters are so immature and the continued efforts of the local tramp to split not only them up, but any other couple she happens upon is just ridiculous - what a waste of 99p.

I couldn't get into the story. The characters didn't have any chemistry and the plot didn't really flow. Unfortunately I did not finish.

This was a brilliant book! I loved all the different characters and how they were developed throughout the story. I loved the story line too, I can't wait to read the next book in the series.