At the King's Command: A Thrilling Medieval Historical Fiction Novel (The Mowbray Chronicles, Book 1)

Brilliant!

Yes. There were typos spelling and mistakes but I still enjoyed every word. I hunger for more. What has happened to Argyle??

This lacked the in-depth that I was looking for. But saying that it picked up in book when the knight was sent abroad.

great story on book3 at moment

initially seemed like an interesting read but by the middle of the tale I gave up, too many inconsistences, suddenly skipping from one year to next with a brief explanation, ( murder of Fontaine) and hero is on his way back from crusade, sorry need more of a storyline. Characters poorly explained, i gave up and deleted it from kindle.

I tried to get to the end, but this is the first book to beat me. The characters have no depth, the jumping back and forth in time is just plain confusing. This desperately needed some publisher and editorial input.

I was very disappointed. Despite making a valiant attempt to get to the end I eventually gave up due to the very poor storyline and excruciatingly poor punctuation…..too many commas and mostly in the wrong place. Clearly the author has good English but not good enough.

Kept reading to see if it got any better : it didn't. A book usually has a beginning . a middle and an end but there was no end ,Perhaps she had a bad week when she wrote this or English is not her first language

Many editorial errors with punctuation and word substitution made this a unpleasant read. The characters and plot were unreal and improbable in places which also distracted from the novel. Ending leaves reader hanging. Did not enjoy.