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A**R
Crafting a future for the town
The mix of characterisation and gumption, with a soupcon of an interesting and well realized System, makes for light and entertaining reading. Good stuff! Best mom.
J**D
I will never look at a sewing needle the same…
Very interesting premise. Extremely well written, with excellent character development and system design. I can’t wait for the next one.
E**N
Fun and unique, but a little confusing
First the good.It's a unique story, and the way the main characters go about gaining their abilities or ignoring their supposed fated path in life to continue on the path they wanted instead but using their abilities in highly unconventional ways.Gwen and her friends are pretty unique in how they go about practicing their skills, and the world is written fairly well.The bad.There are a number of small spelling errors and missing words in the book. And then the confusing part that I mentioned earlier, Gwen makes a number of offhand remarks using earth colloquialisms, mentions things like cell phones and other modern technology, and yet the book never explains how she knows about these things, when they live in a society where they live in run down old wooden shacks, their only mode of transportation is animals or wagons drawn by animals.So it's a little odd at times and kind of pulls you out of the story, when she mentions things about Earth, there's no discussion in here about why she knows about earth etc.
I**L
A surprisingly good unconventional litrpg
The premise is good and the pacing keeps the action moving. This story is absolutely worth reading. The main characters are not OP and even the "bad" guys have some depth.I'm quite excited for the sequel!
N**!
Page Turner
This story was a great take on the support classes wielding weapons, as well as a female main character who has common sense and actual growth throughout the journey. It starts with our protagonist, Gwen, in a small village, who has a lot of gambling on her inherited class. However, things do not turn out how she and the village hope, which makes the book even better.This novel might be one of my favorite books of the year. I cannot wait for Book 2.
K**R
Long live the proletariat
A very interesting take on the system styled stories, where the MCs main power pales in comparison to the will of the people. Fight the bloated greed of the landed gentry, comrades!The next book presumably follows a battle within the system of oppression to pierce through the lies enforced by the ruling class, and I'm all for it.I rate this a socialism/5; the revolution has to start somewhere.
A**R
Interesting concepts, but distracting errors
I loved both the world and the plot of this book. They desperately need an editor or at least a proof reader, there were many repeated lines and typos to the point of being quite confusing.
S**S
A Much Needed Difference in the Genre
This book is very good. The system and how the RPG elements work are very unique. The book is long, but in a good way. Some parts do bog down and need some clarity. The beginning can be confusing. Worth the read and the setup for Book Two has a lot of possibilities.
D**S
very ok
this book was very well written, and the characters are pretty good if a little one dimensional. I just didn’t really like how the story progressed. I felt like characters were underpowered and while thats kind of the idea, it felt like a wasted opportunity. Not sure what I would have done differently though.
V**L
Incrível e original!
Ótima história, com boa construção de mundo e personagens cativantes e interessantes, sem aqueles clichês chatos e protagonistas bobos e previsíveis de tantas outras histórias. Espero ansiosamente por uma continuação dessa aventura!
J**L
Great work
This is one of the few good dungeon stories.I mean it has great world building, an interesting cast and characters that feel real.I can only recommend this.
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