Mated to the Alpha King (A Royal's Tale Book 1)
E**C
Immature characters and writing
I liked the overall premise of the storyline, however it could have been portrayed much better. The characters are all childish and immature. I know most of them are meant to be 18 but you wouldn't think it by reading about them, they act like 15/16 year old. I couldn't quite stand the amount of miscommunication and just blatant impulsiveness of the main characters most of the time. Which resulted in them going in circles for more then half of the book!Given that the grammar is also lacking, including missing words and sentences that go nowhere. Time jumps, actions that have no clear A to B descriptions, it's sometimes a little confusing. I ended up skipping whole paragraphs at one point just to get it over with as it seemed to drone on in some parts.Overall I wouldnt recommend it as a good read!
H**E
A good read but Amazon need to work on their book care.
A really good read with characters you can really like, and not but disappointed in how the book arrived. Photos taken just after I took it out of the box. Made by Amazon too and felt the book looked like it was made cheaply with a few bubbles in the plastic that covered the book, bends and creases. I had the option to return but I wanted to read it. Just disappointed in the quality as I wouldn’t usually spend this much on a book for myself.
K**E
Disappointing
Enjoyable but long winded. Not enough of a storyline, I found too much repetition in the main characters relationship, ( on/off, yes/no, should we/ shouldn't we,) Alpha male came across as a violent bully on occasions and a wimp at other times. Maybe I'm missing the plot it just seemed inconsistent at times. I don't know if this was a fault of editing but the grammar and spelling mistakes were very poor with words missing that should have made whole, complete sentences. I've downloaded the next book but I haven't decided if I should read it or not.
H**G
Great story but writing not great
This was a really great story, however the spelling errors, missing words and grammar in places was very very off putting. The story seemed to jump from one place to another did not flow well. I found myself starting to get annoyed with the main character thi, she at times was weak and over the top with emotions jumping to conclusions like a child.
A**R
Brilliant
Storyline amazing tense in places enjoyed thoroughly . Would of loved bit more action but very much worth reading enjoy
M**S
Beautiful sweet romance
One of my fav books 📖 really loved this book was hoping there would be other books for the other characters!!!
A**R
Amazing
This book is amazing I love the story line AMD all the characters this book had me hooked from the begging. I actually read this book before it was published and bough TV it when it was published it was that good.
A**R
Love love
omg i love it...PERIOD
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